Friday, October 29, 2021
Online learning Term 4 Week 2 2021
Thursday, October 28, 2021
How we can have a Playground by the Pahurehure estuary?
28/09/21
Purpose: To persuade
RT:Opening statement
Sequence of points (Firstly, secondly, thirdly, lastly)
Facts and opinions
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How we can have a Playground by the
Pahurehure estuary?
Dear Auckland council,
In this persuasive writing I'm writing this to persuade the Auckland council to build a playground near the Pahurehure estuary in the future.
Firstly, I think that we should be able to have a playground by the Pahurehure estuary so then kids can have more fun there and get entertained. Another reason why we should have a playground or a fort there is because it will fill up the space where the empty grass is.
Secondly, In the future we should build a playground or a fort for all the kids who go there to get entertained and have fun. It’s a good idea because you have more things to
Thirdly, This will make Pahurehure inlet a much better place with the playground and fort and it would be a good idea in the future because this can be something new that they add to make it a better or more entertaining place to go to.
Lastly, One of the reason why this could make it a better place for the Pahurehure inlet is so that Everyone that goes for walks can not only enjoy going on walks but so kids can have fun playing on the playground or fort that they might add in the future for kids to enjoy.
Friday, October 22, 2021
Online Learning Term 4 Week 1 2021
Thursday, October 21, 2021
Online learning Term 4 Week 1 2021
20/08/21
NL:To grow depth to your sentences.
RT:
How we can improve Pahurehure inlet?
Introduction
This is about things we can change or improve about Pahurehure inlet to make it better.
Firstly, we could add rubbish bins instead of people throwing all the rubbish and litter into the water. I think we should also remove all the mangroves growing in the Pahurehure inlet.
Secondly, We can improve Pahurehure inlet by planting more trees, flowers, or plants and have more wildlife/birds there at Pahurehure inlet.
By improving Pahurehure inlet it can become better if we all grow trees and to see more nature. And so that people don’t leave trash sitting in the water.
Thirdly, I think that if there already aren’t any signs up by the pahurehure inlet they should make a sign telling us things that we can and can not do just to remind people when they go there.
Lastly, by improving Pahurehure inlet It can be better than what it was before by planting more nature and trees there and removing mangroves that are growing.And can we give people reminders what people can and can not do there at Pahurehure inlet.
Friday, October 1, 2021
Online learning Term 3 Week 10 2021