Purpose: To Narrate
RT: Setting - use your senses
Problem and solution
Dialogue - including speaker tags
Slow the action down by adding details
Aim to write 250-500 words at Level 3
So there I was, struggling to go to sleep on christmas eve while all of my family members were fast asleep. I just couldn’t wait any longer. Once I woke up I went to my siblings rooms to wake them up. Before we went to wake up our parents we checked out the presents by the christmas tree and opened up our stockings.
Then when we woke everyone up we all went downstairs to go open our presents. Once we finished opening all of our awesome presents we put them away and had our traditional waffles and omelets for breakfast. Before we did anything else we needed to give our dog food and because it was christmas day we gave our dog delicious food for breakfast.
Later in the afternoon we walked our dog and went to the park to go and play. While we were still on a walk we went down to the beach to feel the river and we took some family christmas photos.
We then arrived at our friend's house for christmas. We played heaps of games and ate dinner there. For dinner we
When we got back home the day was almost over so we went for a night swim and played a whole lot of games in the pool. We watched this super cool christmas movie with this scary monster in it and stayed up ALL NIGHT without going to sleep.
The end
Excellent piece of writing Brooklyn. I loved the way you have framed your writing using all the remember to's. Keep up the good work!
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