Narrative Writing Term 4 Week 4 2021

 10/11/2021

NL:To narrate

RT:include characters

Setting

Problem 

Solution

How the beast nearly took over the world

A week ago something crazy nearly happened and it was so crazy it felt like a dream. It all started in San Francisco when we were on a family trip for a few days.

Me and my family were shopping at a mall until we got an alert on our phones about this big storm that's coming so we then ran to our hotel that we are staying in.

We had to stock up on food and drinks just in case anything horrible happens. Once it was night time we went fast asleep until I had this scary, scary dream that we just came on this same holiday and this scary beast monster came out of the sky and got bigger and bigger. Then the beast monster smashed buildings up and made a huge storm.

Once I woke up to that horrible dream I ran to my brother's room to tell him all about it. Our parents then asked us to come down for breakfast and we had eggs on pancakes with maple syrup. We suddenly heard a LOUD bang outside from the lighting and thunder.

It all looked like my dream i had when i was sleeping and we all SCREAMED when this giant monster beast came out of the sky and when it landed on the ground it got bigger and bigger. 

We got an alert to evacuate immediately before the beast crushes everything and We sprinted away from the beast. It started raining green from the beast. Me and my brother and I got a cup to collect the green rain for some reason and got far away from it. Once everything was back to normal everyone but people either got on a plane or stayed in their houses and didn’t come out.

UH OH… THE BEAST IS BACK… we ran to our car and speeded off. There is one thing that is extremely scary and weird and it's that this is exactly what happened in my dream and what we did to get rid of the beast was to pour the green rain stuff on him and then he will get burnt from it so bad that he dies so we turned around and went right up to the beast. My brother and myself poured all of the green rain on him and went far away from that monster.

He started falling and he became weak. The big beast got so burnt he died and got sucked up by the sky. After that crazy and scary day we immediately went home and never ever went back there…

The end 

Online learning Term 4 Week 3 2021

 

Welcome, For this Week's learning i did alot of things including Reading, Writing,

and maths. For reading i learnt some stories about muralsa dn learnt a bit more 

about them. I also learnt about evaluating in reading like reading what the text 

says, Finding gaps in the stories, and more. For writing i wrote a narrate about

anything iw anted but i had to choose a story starter between so there i was...

or if your overactive imagination runs away from you and you suddenly find your self...then... 

and i chose so there i was. My story was about this little kid who couldn't wait until it wait

until it was christmas because itw as christmas eve. Lastly for maths i learnt about numbers

and how to divide or subtract numbers. My favourite part of what i did this week was

when i made a mural for papkura. On the mural i drew i put some of the birds that are

native to new zealand: )

Writing Term 4 Week 4 2021

 Purpose: To Narrate

RT: Setting - use your senses

• Problem and solution

• Dialogue - including speaker tags

• Slow the action down by adding details

• Aim to write 250-500 words at Level 3

So there I was, struggling to go to sleep on christmas eve while all of my family members were fast asleep. I just couldn’t wait any longer. Once I woke up I went to my siblings rooms to wake them up. Before we went to wake up our parents we checked out the presents by the christmas tree and opened up our stockings.

Then when we woke everyone up we all went downstairs to go open our presents. Once we finished opening all of our awesome presents we put them away and had our traditional waffles and omelets for breakfast. Before we did anything else we needed to give our dog food and because it was christmas day we gave our dog delicious food for breakfast. 

Later in the afternoon we walked our dog and went to the park to go and play. While we were still on a walk we went down to the beach to feel the river and we took some family christmas photos.

We then arrived at our friend's house for christmas. We played heaps of games and ate dinner there. For dinner we

had Mashed potatoes, Cooked broccoli, cooked carrots, hash browns and chicken. After we left we convinced our parents to get ice cream for dessert.

When we got back home the day was almost over so we went for a night swim and played a whole lot of games in the pool. We watched this super cool christmas movie with this scary monster in it and stayed up ALL NIGHT without going to sleep.

The end

Online learning Term 4 Week 2 2021

 

Hello, For this week i did a whole lot of things including Reading, Writing

and Maths. Firstly, for Reading i read a few books and learnt a bit more about

maori language with shapes. Then for Writing i wrote a letter telling Auckland 

council that we should add a playground and a little triangle fort by Pahurehure

estuary for kids. Lastly for Maths i did more stuff about shapes. Some other things

i did is that i made a fort what it could look like by the pahurehure estuary and

made a kahoot about symmetrical buildings. My favourite part about this week

was when i made the kahoot about symmetrical buildings:)

How we can have a Playground by the Pahurehure estuary?

 28/09/21

Purpose: To persuade

RT:Opening statement 

• Sequence of points (Firstly, secondly, thirdly, lastly)

• Facts and opinions

• Use your first name only for Cyber safety 

How we can have a Playground by the 

Pahurehure estuary?

Dear Auckland council,

In this persuasive writing I'm writing this to persuade the Auckland council to build a playground near the Pahurehure estuary in the future.

Firstly, I think that we should be able to have a playground by the Pahurehure estuary so then kids can have more fun there and get entertained. Another reason why we should have a playground or a fort there is because it will fill up the space where the empty grass is. 

Secondly, In the future we should build a playground or a fort for all the kids who go there to get entertained and have fun. It’s a good idea because you have more things to

do there and more options when you're by the Pahurehure estuary.

Thirdly, This will make Pahurehure inlet a much better place with the playground and fort and it would be a good idea in the future because this can be something new that they add to make it a better or more entertaining place to go to.

Lastly, One of the reason why this could make it a better place for the Pahurehure inlet is so that Everyone that goes for walks can not only enjoy going on walks but so kids can have fun playing on the playground or fort that they might add in the future for kids to enjoy.

Online Learning Term 4 Week 1 2021

 

Hello, For this week the topic is about Pahurehure inlet and ways we could improve

it. I did reading writing maths and for reading i read a few books and looked at a few

texts. for maths i learnt a lot about clocks and finding the right time to match the 

digital clock to the analogue clock. Lastly for writing we had to write about two 

different things. The first writing piece is about ways we can change/improve things

about Pahurehure inlet and the second one is about a letter telling the Auckland council

some improvments we can change about Pahurehure inlet.

Key Competency Certificate

 

                                                Congratulations Brooklyn!