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Thursday, June 10, 2021

Writing Week 6

Made up Story                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Its time. the whistle blows when the netball game is about to start."whistle blows" and everyone are in there position. I was a goal shooter so when my team mate passed the ball to me i had to quickly grab the ball because another player other team nearly would have grabbed the ball. when it was the end of the first game and our you could tell we were a little tired because we were sweating and everyone had pumping heart beats. the whistle was about to go for the next quarter and this game was a bit more fun because every was working together to try get the ball into the goal. we got into our positions to start. Ready. Set. GO.(whistle blows) everyone is aiming for the ball and everyone is on a roll. when we got a goal we were all happy about getting a goal. when the ball nearly went out of the court one of our team mate had saved the ball from going out of the court. she saved the ball like shes running for her life. when the other team scored we needed to do a bit better if we wanted to win because they were 2 points ahead of us. after a few more games we ended up WINNING and we shook everybody's hands. and that is what happend at the netball game.

2 comments:

  1. Hi brooklyn it's khwan love your wrtiting great descirbing!

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  2. hi my name is jasreet and i loved your name art keep up the good work

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