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Friday, October 29, 2021

Online learning Term 4 Week 2 2021

 

Hello, For this week i did a whole lot of things including Reading, Writing
and Maths. Firstly, for Reading i read a few books and learnt a bit more about
maori language with shapes. Then for Writing i wrote a letter telling Auckland 
council that we should add a playground and a little triangle fort by Pahurehure
estuary for kids. Lastly for Maths i did more stuff about shapes. Some other things
i did is that i made a fort what it could look like by the pahurehure estuary and
made a kahoot about symmetrical buildings. My favourite part about this week
was when i made the kahoot about symmetrical buildings:)

Thursday, October 28, 2021

How we can have a Playground by the Pahurehure estuary?

 28/09/21

Purpose: To persuade

RT:Opening statement 

  • Sequence of points (Firstly, secondly, thirdly, lastly)

  • Facts and opinions

  • Use your first name only for Cyber safety 


How we can have a Playground by the 

Pahurehure estuary?






Dear Auckland council,



In this persuasive writing I'm writing this to persuade the Auckland council to build a playground near the Pahurehure estuary in the future.



Firstly, I think that we should be able to have a playground by the Pahurehure estuary so then kids can have more fun there and get entertained. Another reason why we should have a playground or a fort there is because it will fill up the space where the empty grass is. 



Secondly, In the future we should build a playground or a fort for all the kids who go there to get entertained and have fun. It’s a good idea because you have more things to

do there and more options when you're by the Pahurehure estuary.


Thirdly, This will make Pahurehure inlet a much better place with the playground and fort and it would be a good idea in the future because this can be something new that they add to make it a better or more entertaining place to go to.



Lastly, One of the reason why this could make it a better place for the Pahurehure inlet is so that Everyone that goes for walks can not only enjoy going on walks but so kids can have fun playing on the playground or fort that they might add in the future for kids to enjoy.


Friday, October 22, 2021

Online Learning Term 4 Week 1 2021

 

Hello, For this week the topic is about Pahurehure inlet and ways we could improve
it. I did reading writing maths and for reading i read a few books and looked at a few
texts. for maths i learnt a lot about clocks and finding the right time to match the 
digital clock to the analogue clock. Lastly for writing we had to write about two 
different things. The first writing piece is about ways we can change/improve things
about Pahurehure inlet and the second one is about a letter telling the Auckland council
some improvments we can change about Pahurehure inlet.

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Thursday, October 21, 2021

Online learning Term 4 Week 1 2021

 20/08/21

NL:To grow depth to your sentences.

RT:


How we can improve Pahurehure inlet?


Introduction

 This is about things we can change or improve about Pahurehure inlet to make it better.


Firstly, we could add rubbish bins instead of people throwing all the rubbish and litter into the water. I think we should also remove all the mangroves growing in the Pahurehure inlet. 



Secondly, We can improve Pahurehure inlet by planting more trees, flowers, or plants and have more wildlife/birds there at Pahurehure inlet.


By improving Pahurehure inlet it can become better if we all grow trees and to see more nature. And so that people don’t leave trash sitting in the water.


Thirdly, I think that if there already aren’t any signs up by the pahurehure inlet they should make a sign telling us things that we can and can not do just to remind people when they go there.


Lastly, by improving Pahurehure inlet It can be better than what it was before by planting more nature and trees there and removing mangroves that are growing.And can we give people reminders what people can and can not do there at Pahurehure inlet.

Friday, October 1, 2021

Online learning Term 3 Week 10 2021

 

Hello, for this week i have done a lot of learning like reading, writing, and maths.
For reading i read a bit of books and learnt about diabetes and what the two type
of diabetes mean. For writing i wrote a explanation about how our body works
but mainly about our brain. But before i wrote and explanation i made a plan about
it. Lastly for maths i solved some problems and did a bit of addition and subtraction.
I also learnt more about clocks to see how they work and to learn the different times.
For my create choice i used a pice of paper, a pencil, and clear tape to see what my 
fingerprint looks like on my index finger. My favourite part about this week was 
getting to learn different times on a clock and to get a better understanding of clocks.