How we can have a Playground by the Pahurehure estuary?

 28/09/21

Purpose: To persuade

RT:Opening statement 

• Sequence of points (Firstly, secondly, thirdly, lastly)

• Facts and opinions

• Use your first name only for Cyber safety 

How we can have a Playground by the 

Pahurehure estuary?

Dear Auckland council,

In this persuasive writing I'm writing this to persuade the Auckland council to build a playground near the Pahurehure estuary in the future.

Firstly, I think that we should be able to have a playground by the Pahurehure estuary so then kids can have more fun there and get entertained. Another reason why we should have a playground or a fort there is because it will fill up the space where the empty grass is. 

Secondly, In the future we should build a playground or a fort for all the kids who go there to get entertained and have fun. It’s a good idea because you have more things to

do there and more options when you're by the Pahurehure estuary.

Thirdly, This will make Pahurehure inlet a much better place with the playground and fort and it would be a good idea in the future because this can be something new that they add to make it a better or more entertaining place to go to.

Lastly, One of the reason why this could make it a better place for the Pahurehure inlet is so that Everyone that goes for walks can not only enjoy going on walks but so kids can have fun playing on the playground or fort that they might add in the future for kids to enjoy.