Writing Term 3 Week 6

 31/08/21

NL:To persuade

RT:Opening statement 

Sequence of points (Firstly, secondly, thirdly, lastly)

Concluding statement 

Facts and opinions

Should New Zealand Open Its borders?

Introduction

The border is where we can travel outside of New Zealand but if the government decides to close its borders then it might be because something has happened or like now it's because we’re in lockdown and no one can come to New zealand.

I think that we should not open the borders because then other people can come to new zealand without knowing there is covid 19 in new zealand. Another reason why is because people can also bring covid 19 here and that's mainly how people get coronavirus in their countries.

Firstly i think we shouldn’t open the borders simply because covid 19 spreads everywhere and it's really risky if we would open the borders.

But I do think that we should open the borders when everything is clear and there are no more cases in New Zealand.

Secondly i think we shouldn’t open the borders because it would help us get less cases from people traveling to New Zealand instead of the borders being open so everyone from around the world can give us covid 19.

If we would open the borders than people from around the world probably wouldn’t get warnings that we are in lockdown and if we

there would be no point because we can’t travel while we are in lockdown.

Lastly i think that we shouldn't open the borders because its very dangerous and if we wanted to open the borders i think we should wait until there are no cases.