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Thursday, November 11, 2021

Narrative Writing Term 4 Week 4 2021

 10/11/2021

NL:To narrate

RT:include characters

Setting

Problem 

Solution



How the beast nearly took over the world


A week ago something crazy nearly happened and it was so crazy it felt like a dream. It all started in San Francisco when we were on a family trip for a few days.

Me and my family were shopping at a mall until we got an alert on our phones about this big storm that's coming so we then ran to our hotel that we are staying in.



We had to stock up on food and drinks just in case anything horrible happens. Once it was night time we went fast asleep until I had this scary, scary dream that we just came on this same holiday and this scary beast monster came out of the sky and got bigger and bigger. Then the beast monster smashed buildings up and made a huge storm.



Once I woke up to that horrible dream I ran to my brother's room to tell him all about it. Our parents then asked us to come down for breakfast and we had eggs on pancakes with maple syrup. We suddenly heard a LOUD bang outside from the lighting and thunder.



It all looked like my dream i had when i was sleeping and we all SCREAMED when this giant monster beast came out of the sky and when it landed on the ground it got bigger and bigger. 


We got an alert to evacuate immediately before the beast crushes everything and We sprinted away from the beast. It started raining green from the beast. Me and my brother and I got a cup to collect the green rain for some reason and got far away from it. Once everything was back to normal everyone but people either got on a plane or stayed in their houses and didn’t come out.



UH OH… THE BEAST IS BACK… we ran to our car and speeded off. There is one thing that is extremely scary and weird and it's that this is exactly what happened in my dream and what we did to get rid of the beast was to pour the green rain stuff on him and then he will get burnt from it so bad that he dies so we turned around and went right up to the beast. My brother and myself poured all of the green rain on him and went far away from that monster.



He started falling and he became weak. The big beast got so burnt he died and got sucked up by the sky. After that crazy and scary day we immediately went home and never ever went back there…



The end 



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